Teachable Moment 2.0
Posted by shannonsmith on October 19, 2009
This morning I had a few minutes to catch my Twitter feed via tweetdeck and noticed that my colleague in London, ON – Danika – had shared her students’ personal essays on their class blog. I took a few minutes to listen to the students’ voice recordings of their essays and realized that they were a perfect pairing for my own students’ memoirs – a work in progress in our classroom at the moment.
Students in my class have been working on their memoirs in our writer’s workshop over the past week and we are focusing on developing word choice (expectation 2.3 writing - regularly use vivid and/or figurative language and innovative expressions in their writing) and voice (expectation 2.2 writing – establish a distinctive voice in their own writing).
After making a few quick adjustments to my afternoon lesson plans, I was able to set aside a little chunk of time for my students to listen to the personal essays and discuss them. I facilitated the conversation to focus on content, organization, word choice and voice. The discussion was rich and I believe that hearing the examples written by Danika’s students provided my students with excellent models of personal memoir writing.
After my students took a few minutes to ‘rapid write’ their reflections on the essays, we posted our comments to their class blog - a networked learning teachable moment!
- image “Cat-5 Network Cable” cc by Darren Hester
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Summer vacation officially begins in just over a week and I have to admit I’ve already started initial preparations. The first ‘cottage mix’ is ready to go (heavy on the chill out tunes of Ron Sexsmith, Hayden, Jim Bryson, Brett Dennen, etc…) and my summer reading list is coming together, thanks to suggestions from friends and colleagues. Actually, the title of this post is taken from a book recommended to me by the social worker attached to our school. In fact, when I got my hands on a copy, I couldn’t wait for summer to crack it open and have a look. And, as it turns out, it struck a chord with me and pulled me in.


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Over the past weeks